Great read! Greatly recommended! Excellent prose, to the point, deliberate, clear, really sets the tone. The lack of art really adds to it by giving you tunnel vision into the events of the plot. Really looking forward to reading more from this guy, he knows his stuff!
i mean i think thats why regular books are a thing, conversely visuals when done well enhance the story ten fold thats why i love animated shows, and shows with actually well made costumes/CGI
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I really liked this story.
The clever use of shadows to allow for multiple characters with the same sprites also added a lot to the mood.
The writing is good and goes to the point so I was hooked.
I wish this was longer, because I got really invested and wanted to know more!
Overall, fantastic!
Great read! Greatly recommended! Excellent prose, to the point, deliberate, clear, really sets the tone. The lack of art really adds to it by giving you tunnel vision into the events of the plot. Really looking forward to reading more from this guy, he knows his stuff!
goes to show that story trumps visuals
i mean i think thats why regular books are a thing, conversely visuals when done well enhance the story ten fold thats why i love animated shows, and shows with actually well made costumes/CGI
ooo this one surprised me how well it worked with the minimalist visual style
The black sprites with higlighted hair look cool, but it's a bit distracting that all the girls look the same.
The story really didn't go where I expected it too, in a good way.